WALT: structure our writing with an introduction and topic sentences.
I learnt how to use headings properly in my writing .
The hard thing was trying to put my ideas in good writing .
The easy thing was writing the intro.
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Hey Myah, your use of headings made it really easy to understand your ideas. It is a shame there weren't more facts in this writing though. It would have made it more persuasive. I did enjoy seeing your blog post template, was that what you used to write your letter?
Hey Myah,
ReplyDeleteyour use of headings made it really easy to understand your ideas. It is a shame there weren't more facts in this writing though. It would have made it more persuasive. I did enjoy seeing your blog post template, was that what you used to write your letter?